Love Fear Apex Predator

Even if we wrote the perfect love song

Would it be trusted?

Scary as hell to think someone could effect us in a way that profoundly changes our course and direction in life

Fatal flaw, wants to be loved but can’t trust the system that provides that love

Likely has happened more than once, on stories and in real life

Delivering perfectely?

Perfectly when so many other prayers and bad paths God has taken us down?

Then possibly figures it out too late? then steps into the middle of a wedding?

Or sits outside in tears and the rain

Is the person that creates that amazing, or a vampire that lifts our hearts and then only crushes them later? Our own prejudice caused by the jaded system and jaded situations in our life thus end up winning again in a profound way

Kind of a fucked up tragedy thought

Would make for a good song

Might even make a woman Pretty Savage

Emotion and connection is always good? Get a vampire to fall for you?

Vampire a bit too obvious, but the idea does make sense

Thoughts on verse writing sequel, advice from YouTube as well as listening to a few songs

First time people hear you
Estabilish Style
Confidence, does the verse sound confident?
Story told half told not really told?
Relatable Inspiring Story
Real, Real about being Fake

People want to hate on you
They want amazing music, but they don’t want to be charmed easily
They don’t want to feel easy to get
Vampire through the door?
Lots of other great music, never heard of this one

Billion Dollar Bitch https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8qCLx5D5Mg
Established Strong

light airy deceptive pull aways, story re-establishes context and style

Bridge a little meta? “yeah of course I do” or is that prechorus

bridge change in context, might have some of it wrong, still working on my concepts

Freedom J5 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jyV3nsKESPM

Chorus Freedom, hold on to the feeling

Schooled in Wisdom of the ages (style)
Hard ships in schooling
encouragment to persevere
Establish the context of the discrepancy and argument
One man or woman can truely decribe the pain of all prisoners worldwide
Context and pain, new songs aren’t Christ and are still valuable
Side stepped like a raptor
Oh yeah you see it how it is? think, think again
Low voice contrast, all low voice maybe not as much
Lens flare good, all lens flare less good
Lens flares in vocal form, cymbal crash? Verbal lens flare?
Something that comes on strong, huge sparkle fast fade

Beyonce Freedom https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7FWF9375hUA

Likely means something different for women than men
Timer ticking stuck in that jail cell? not getting any younger
Like fire melting chains
Normandy didn’t notice that before, kind of cool, popular over popular, still nice reminder don’t want new hilters breaking the bank
pressure hold back pressure hold back pressure hold back
fighting the concrete walls, can appreciate that
“winner don’t quit on themselves”, encouragement and discipline built in
Chorus like Deadpool Chamber, looking at verses right now
Running blind in truth, “may the last one burn into flames” (tears so bad last one like a bomb of vengeance)
Hopeful battle cry support, walking into a bad operation, extraction

with amount of oppression in, not ideal for commenting in ways that don’t offend

Guns and Roses November Rain https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8SbUC-UaAxE

Shame Paralysis away let the Vampire in the door

Guns and Rose Patience https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ErvgV4P6Fzc

“Girl I think about you every day now”
Patience waiting on love half broken half hopeful, relatable and real
Little over invested in true love, definitely relatable not always wise
Thoughts of kind of wanting a woman and not wanting to push the line too far
Time slow, possibly not enough appreciation for Turbulent flow
Love the bridge on this song, really makes the song sing to me
kind of the in the gutter, Vanilla sky, Johnny Cash song that save moment
Pain broken half hopeful suspense build up with a plea
If your going to make a plea for true love, do it right
Better than hear “ooh thats gross” – Futurama “hit the road jack” – Ray Charles

3 Days Grace Hate everything about you https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d8ekz_CSBVg
nice clean intro
“not too late never too late” – 3 Days Grace
fighting the parts of the relationship we hate, trying to hold something together falling apart
can relate to that, hope to turn around in a jaded context
both of us are losing and still fighting

Breaking Benjamin So Cold https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UkI4KejmSfY
Amazing inflecting guitar lines cold and dark
guitar singing like light rays in the dark
Drop beat “Its alright” awesome

Hoobastank The Reason – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fV4DiAyExN0
“Perfect Person”
Not a fan of the intro, the song is cool, kind of fits with it
New Opportunity Love Song, a little danger from Charisma standpoint
High flying melody lines like Creed Higher, can appreciate that

The Game – really like the drop beats, also really like the one about “and what to burn” can’t remember the name of the song, Fear, like a controlled burn of part of a dry forest to prevent larger forest fires

God did it to me so I can do it to them, not a good thing to capitalize on or promote
Baggage in baggage out, better algorithms to promote

Made me think about the intro a bit, amazing voice, not sure I should always trust amazing voices

Sirens and Police Sirens, and thoughts on the correspondence?

https://www.dictionary.com/browse/correspondence

noun
communication by exchange of letters.

a letter or letters that pass between correspondents:It will take me all day to answer this business correspondence.

Also correspondency. an instance of corresponding.

similarity or analogy.
agreement; conformity.
news, commentary, letters, etc., received from a newspaper or magazine correspondent.

Only you can stop Firenados

Searched Drop beats, thought is halfing the time signature, first result on search

Pretty hot set, lead up then fall into the beat, kind of like crowd surfing

Some thoughts

Fatal Character Flaws
Knowing what they are in many of the characters in the story
And being able to pull strings around all of it
By surveillance data gained unfairly
Trust worthy to manipulator
Manipulator to trust worthy
and back again
Then modulating resources based on all of it
Killing and executing people based on all of it
Fatal flaw?
Thinking the system above human evils

Bad labels, wasted time, and insecure systems
To the level that winds up with people falling between the gears
Can’t blame friends with bad inputs
Probably what friends capable of bad inputs might argue
Want a prosecutor, don’t show them that
Want a defender, show them too much of that?

All for the fight and the profit of more hours in the court room?
People need jobs not an adequate execuse for dragging people through court
Legalism that dramatically effects our lives, and yet we are instilled with limited access to it
Limited access to the fact that exponetial rate of growth prevents a lot of knowns and exponential rate of growth fuels lots of unknowns

lots of reason for reasonable doubt
reasonable doubt if we should care
either the system fucks us or our friends fall short
and the devil profits from the contrast between the 2

Required to act on unknowns, better to act with love, grace, and hope

better to act with energy and reverence for the unknown

because the unknown is a given

System decided to turn on the jade knob, just forgot to turn it off

Devil in the details? “I am not a perfect person” -> “Your right that intro’s got to go”

War vs want to destroy my own product lines? Non ideal choice set

Needs a catchier title Fire Code Research Deoptimization?

Father please don’t pastel my studio and algorithms while simultaneously not mislabeling people for shit In Christ’s name I ask this

Possible example

1. Popular system makes fun of woman or man
2. woman or man stops relying upon system for encouragement
3. woman or man finds way to encourage and motivate self
4. woman or man no longer trusts encouragement and advice of others
5. woman or man only relies upon self for encouragement and advice, a narcissist generation algorithm

If we don’t want more narcissists protect, support, give love and grace to them in the first place. “Hurt people hurt people”

Making fun of the voice might cause the studio “but it is sooo bad”

Maybe they don’t have enough support, maybe they need more medical support, how could you sing if you could barely breathe?

A good kitten is huggable, a less nice kitten is not huggable